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hmmm

I like random rants, and this one was of them. I was amused. I just wish that people, point and case with this one, would use a pop filter. If you cannot afford one, use the poor man's version and secure toilet paper in front of the mic.
Thats my only criticism. Other than that, it was funny and should stay.

Funny

Funny, and I laughed more since I listen to Dane Cook and he does a comedy skit about why he wants a monkey. Anyway, I have the same problem with the sounds being off on my stuff online too. Me recent one, the animation was very slow compared to what its supposed to be so the music was off. Anyway, this is about you, good job.

AdamJack responds:

Yer, it's really give me a headache. I spent loads of time on this, (recording and animation) and the sound is going nuts. If got to hand this in tomoro and I still cant find whats wronge with it. Thanks for your review.

neat

I likes the smootheness of the animation. Id really like to see more than lines and exploding pebbles from you though. Since you have the ability to animate I think you can make more graphically challenging pieces. The song, I wasnt hot on, counting to ten is kinda boring, but obviously the real reason we are here is to test out our animation. Good job overall.

Funny

Not much animation involved but the overall plot doesnt really need it. I didnt expect the ending which was over the top and made it funny as crap. No pun intended. Gotta love toilet humor.

HalfV responds:

yes. yes you do.

Good job

I liked the presentation overall. I did not agree at all with the political plug against Bush. Yes yes, you can have an opinion but being in the military and having been in the Mid East, I know most americans are ignorant to the situation and blast Bush with out knowing what they are talking about. That aside, I really really did like this flash. I would give an A+ if I was your teacher. Good job on the project.

PhiTuS responds:

thanks

Splinter Cell haha

That was pretty funny and decent graphics going on. I would say, though, that the sound is your next step to improvement. Use something infront of the mic like a make shift pop filter to stop poping noises and wind sounds from your mouth. Try acid music to adjust sound levels and smooth it out. Good job overall.

Mixed feelings

Ok looks like hard work went into this. Pretty good on the lip-sync and the sounds was clear. Graphics were good, and humor was thought out. I am not so sure whether or not this was a complete mockery of christian beliefs or if it was just trying to be funny with a topic and not with the intent to scorn. I am actually leaning to the mockery, so correct me if I am wrong. If so, good job overall but youre really pointing a vicious cartoon and mocking people who need not be. I myself am christian, and I have all my teeth, can count, and don't care to much at how you think my morals are rediculous. I also am in the military and support Bush, so my feelings on the Bush bashing are also negative. However, I still laughed because in a way it is all funny even if it is all a mockery. If this cartoon was meant to be harmless the I appologize. I cannot claim to know your intentions. So good job overall, take this with a grain of salt, funny, and sorry if you really were doing for comedy and not using this as your soap box.

when i met a canandian

So here I am watching this and remembering when we (the us navy)did an exercise with the canadian special forces a mont ago. Instead of rescuing our downed men they ended up shooting at their own troops with our men in the middle of their fire fight, and half of them got wiped out by 5 army guys pretending to be terrorists. Then on the evasion part, a canadiam officer told one of our men to wander off since the special forces that were left put him in the back of the pack, stupid move. It took them 5 minutes to realize he was gone. One of them found him while running and calling his name, then broke his leg on some uneven ground, so they called us....US, the ones who had the downed men that they were supposed to be rescuing, to come rescue him. In conclusion, I liked the Canadians there...but by God they are the worst soldiers next to the french I have ever seen. No wonder we never ask them to help us do anything. But it is good to be proud of your country, and by the way...they do say "eh" and "aboot" when they talk.

Focus is good

Ok ok in all fairness you did say that this is a bunch of short films, but I think if you had a focus, a story, something to direct your talents, you could make something worth graphically watching. All you need is a good plot and ta da, you have a good flash submission! It was a good spot to showcase your talents and I also think that you can make even better graphics if you really did work hard on them. Keep it up.

BritishMoose responds:

hehe, thanks a lot. it's true, this did have no plot what so ever. but i am not sure what we had in mind when we made it =S thanks for commenting on our "talents" too xD
thanks again dude!

Back up a sec

It might have been funny at first but I laughed then chuckled then sniffed then got annoyed. In all fairness I have not seen the other episodes but if they are anything like this then no thanks. The graphics were alright, not the worst not the best but they work fine for this. The song was funny, the name is funny, and the first or second error was humorous. I could barely understand cletus though. I think that you could make other stuff and it would be pretty good.

I tried at the flash animation but realized I had not patience for it so I am working on music now.

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